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One has to wonder... when will people rise up and take a stand against this tyranny that is cropping up within America's walls. People who used to be for America... have turned their backs and turned to attacking America instead.

Well, a group of fighters who call themselves; NCIS Stryker have taken upon themselves. Their only last hope. As much as the cops hate it, they now have to rely on the team. Washington state was one of the states that seceded from the union. And became a independent state, along with the state of Texas, Ohio, and the rest of the mountain and central states.

Leading the charge...Commander Joshua Levin. Father to Jordan and Agate, husband to Evalyn. The states mentioned also joined the fight against DC and those that would threaten to attack the citizens.

All this...was thanks to one president. One president who would act on his own. Rather than support the citizens, he would support the enemies of America. All this happened when Deeks finished a mission with his partner; Kensi.

And thus... this' where the story starts


*cough cough*

"G-guys?" Deeks as he woke up from his rest and he got up from the couch.

"You there Deeks?" said Kensi

"Yeah, what happened here?"

"Seems this president is going on the offensive and starting to attack us."

"Fortunately most of us survived the first wave of attack." Eric Beal

"We're here Deeks. I just got off the phone with Commander Joshua. Says that we're to head there." Hetty

"What happened to Sam and Callen"

"You rang?"

"So, you made it too."

"Just barely, I had to get my wife and kid safe. How bout you guys?" Callen

"Well, we have to leave. As in right now. The building's about to collapse" Granger

"This' no drill." Eric

"So, no usual OSP meet up?"

"Nope I'm afraid. I know, we had such good memories in this OSP." Nell

So Nell and Eric look back at their OSP center one last time, with people evacuating the room.

"Really? Me and Kens were about to go on a vacation." Deeks

"You can save the jokes for later"

"I know, I was just trying to lighten the mood"

"I thought the same too partner. But as it seems, we have to get out of here" Kensi

And thus Hetty, Granger, Callen, Sam, Deeks, Kensi, Eric and Nell got out of the office. Which they saw the bomb blast level the place.

The next day, a portal opens up where the entrance to the LA base used to be.

"Get in!" shouted a voice

The gang went through the portal, this portal led them to the new NCIS Stryker base at Washington state. The new shelter and base of operations. Commander Joshua along with his son; Jordan, Jordan's brother; Agate and friend; Yuma met them at the other end of the portal.

"What happened?" questioned Joshua Bright

*Jordan nods his head left to right* "Not right now" said Jordan

Kensi starts to cry, with Deeks comforting her.

"Hey Kuya, thanks for taking us in" Deeks

"Anytime" Jordan

Evalyn Levin along with Jordan helps them get set up in the base. From a President who everybody thought would lead America, now would betray the nation.

Former liberals, now turned conservatives join the fight to take back America. The nation that was once the Land of the Free.
Trafalgar Law's POV
I've met some interesting friends, during my time with the Straw hat crew. But the one I won't forget is Nami and her captain Luffy. More so Luffy. They've told me stories of how he would go to the extremes so to protect his team.

Heh, even to this day. I still question him. Even to protect me. A stranger whom he only met since the Archiepelago saga.

It's kinda funny, he reminds me of the stunts that Corazon would pull. I'd get really mad. While my sister would laugh on, it was humiliating.

Me, my original mission was to tag along with Luffy and complete our objective. And that would be that. And that when we met, we'd be frienemies. Even I didn't want anything to do with Luffy. And why Luffy did what he did.

But I guess, I was a total jerk. Not wanting the help of others. 9 pm, Luffy came in. "Hey bud, what're you doing". He said

"Oh hey, I'm just writing a journal of the adventures I've been on when I was with your crew." Law

Tears fall from Law's face

"What's wrong Law?"

"It's just, I was think about my family and Corazon. Seeing them powerless against Doflamingo. I couldn't do anything. Especially with Corazon.

"Believe me, I was in a similar situation. Remember with the Marineford?"

"Yeah, if my team hadn't come you'd be dead." Law

"So, I take it you guys were pretty busy huh?" Robin

"Yeah, these two were going at it. Due to what happened, Luffy went to aid Law against Doflamingo. Because as a friend or a brother figure...he wouldn't want that scene from Marineford to play again." Paulie

As for the place that the gang were staying at, it was a Dressrosa inn.

"So, where will u go to now Law?"

"Dunno. I mean, the straw hats have done so much for me. Nami, Sanji cooking and the rest etc..."

"Well, wouldn't the only logical conclusion would be to join with them? They can back you up. And Luffy, you've seen what he's capable of doing right?" Paulie

"Yeah, guess your right"

*Law goes back to his room*

"Heh, dude's asleep fast. Guess all that fighting did both us in" said Law as he smirked

That's how it was. Luffy here was all tuckered out, using his strongest Gear ability. If him and his gang hadn't come to my aid, I would've been dead at the hands of Doflamingo. Luffy though, he reminded me of my best friend Corazon. Always sticking up for me. Even though I didn't quite get it at first.
It's the next day. The stage which the Tribe Cool Crew gang hung out is empty. No one around, just a few passerbys. "Shame, to think that this place was packed." said a young motorcyclist (26 yrs old). "I hear ya bro. With the Tribe Cool Crew gang dancing." said the motorcyclists younger brother (20 yrs old).

Rather than having stage shows, people were just passing by the stage. It wasn't the same. Just then Haneru and Kanon go up on stage and dance.

"Did he sell us out?" Kanon

"I'd like to think not. I mean, here we hit it off really well. Going through these dance competitions". said Haneru

*sighs* both Haneru and Kanon. As they go back to their respective home.

The time when they got home... a little past 15:00

"What's wrong son?" said Haneru's dad

"Well, the thing is..." said Haneru as he told them what happened

"Ouch, that bad?"

"Yeah, think I'll go to bed early." Haneru as he went to his room, with tears in his eyes.

The following day, Haneru dances at the usual hang out place where the gang met, all alone Suddenly, a tall figure comes in. "Heh, I knew you'd be here"

"So, did you really mean it? That you wanted to split us?" Haneru

"Well, thing is. That I thought that I could do it alone. That I didn't need you guys. But I found out, that it was more harder. Going it alone" said ???

"Me and Kanon trusted you."

"Believe me dude, I'm at fault here. It was selfish what I did."

"It's not that I don't hate you. You were the one that was encouraging me and Kanon in the first place. You were like a brother that I didn't have. And you've seen NCIS: LA right? Well, they're a team that rely on each other to get the work done. It'd be impossible if they were to go in at it alone." Haneru

"Wow, you really think that I'm like a brother to you?" Kumo

*sniff* "Yeah."

"Heh, look at you. Giving me this pep talk."

"Well, you do need it. After all what you did" Haneru

"Fair enough."

"Tell you what, since I got paid the other day. Let me treat you out. I want to make up for what I did. Y'know, buddy-buddy in all." Kumo

"Sounds good."

"Truthfully, I'd also be lost. If it wasn't for the team. Mizuki, Kanon, Yuzuru and you. Though I must admit you do crazy stunts time to time"

"Haha, same can be said with you."


After lunch time, the two friends relaxed at Haneru's home. Kumo told them about what happened, and he apologized. So, Haneru's mom thought that it would be great if he spent the night at their place. Haneru agreed.
Betrayal - Team Tribe Cool Crew Dissolved? 3
How does one repair a trust that was broken? That's on Kumo's mind. Not thinking about anyone else but only putting himself first.  
We last left the gang having been split apart. Which Kumo received a strong rebuke from his team and Jey El. "I knew it, it was all about you wasn't it". said a dissapointed Yuzuru.

Mizuki and Yuzuru were also frustrated. Having to now compete with Kanon and Haneru. "Poor guys" said Mizuki.

*The following conversation took place at 7 pm, at the usual eatery. But without Haneru and Kanon to join them.*

"Poor guys? What me?"

"Don't even go there. I don't even know where to start. So, you broke up the team. So that you can hone your skills? I get that we have to practice our dance moves so we can compete with other groups in all. But to do this right here? And in front of them? Was really selfish" Mizuki

"C'mon Mizuki, back me up here. We're friends right?" Kumo

"Friends? Answer me this then, does friends break up the team? Like how u casually did?" Mizuki

"N-no. But..."

"You heard them Kumo. You betrayed their trust. I've seen you guys go at it as a team, you were so good. Now, it seems like you guys have given up." said the fastfood worker.

"As if, I could do better. I don't need them." Kumo

"Now who's being the cocky and arrogant one? Even Haneru or Kanon couldn't bring themselves to hear this news" Mizuki

"Dance should energize the whole group. Not tear them apart." Yuzuru

"Seriously guys? K, this' getting ridiculous" Kumo

"It is isn't it? But even if you talk to Haneru or Kanon, do you think they'll accept your half-baked apology? I mean, who's to say that you would apologize, then go back on your apology and backstab them?" Mizuki

"Think about it Kumo. If Jey really sees that we broke up, he may not accept us. Saying; "Hmm..okay, what happened to Tribe Cool Crew?" You: Oh, we broke up. So I can hone my skills and dance with you Jey." said Yuzuru

"Do you think he would accept that?" Mizuki

"Where's the "big brother supporting his siblings" type of person that I first saw in you when Kanon and Haneru joined with us huh? Don't tell me that was a lie and saying that you didn't need them in the first place" Yuzuru

"That hurts guys, and here I was supporting you" Kumo

"Well, you did but look at what you did. You cast them aside, as if they were thrown away like recyclable paper or plastic water bottles. That they didn't matter. They might as be dead in your eyes" Yuzuru

"Which is it? Me, myself and I? Or... supporting the team as a whole" Mizuki

"If the answer is me, myself and I. Then you can forget it." Yuzuru


"Look, if you want to repair this friendship. You first have to talk to them and set things straight. It will be hard, yes. But knowing you. Your like a big brother to them. Show them that you care. And you HAD better apologize. Because Kanon is my friend too." Mizuki

So Kumo went off to see Haneru and Kumo. And would be a good time to spend time with them.

Kumo's POV
That's how it started out. See, I wanted to perfect my dancing skills and show it to Jey. Not knowing how Haneru and Kanon would take it. I'm sure they were bummed out of their minds. When they heard the news.

Heh, guess I deserve all this backlash. I thought that I could do these on my own. That if I showed Jey El, that he would accept me. But to see them like that.

So Kumo goes to visit Haneru first while Mizuki visits Kanon. In the hope that they would settle the matter and come together as a team. Restored...and ready to take on other teams.
Betrayal - Team Tribe Cool Crew Dissolved? 2
Chapter 2 of Betrayal - Team Tribe Cool Crew Dissolved?

Mizuki and Yuzuru have a stern and harsh conversation with Kumo. 
After their dance practice, Haneru...lays on his bed in his room. He wonders what they did wrong to deserve such a split within the team. Was it something that Kanon did? Nah! But what? They were a good dance team, having taste what real dance battles are really like.

Overcoming obstacles together, laughing together, just enjoying life. But now, the thought of a split. Even Kanon couldn't believe it herself. "Why?" She said in her mind. "Mizuki and I were really good friends. She even helped me when I felt like I had no hope".

Just then...on the way home from school, Master T moon waltzes and catches up with Haneru wearing a black tanktop w/brown khakis and black sneakers. "What's wrong dude? Care to tell me about it?" he said.

So they stopped at Haneru and Kanon's usual dance practice spot.

"Well, the thing is..." said Haneru as he started a conversation with T.

"That bad huh?"

"Yeah, I mean we hit it off really well. Doing dance battles as a team, and cooperating as a team. But now he wants to split us?"

"I-I'm sorry. But when he hear's this, he's gonna be pretty disappointed". Master T

"I suspect it as much. Said Haneru

"Shh, it's okay." Master T as he comforted Haneru like a big brother

"Thanks. But, it was good having this talk. Having a friend listen"

"Anytime. So, should I tell him?"

"Yeah, doesn't like when people tell secrets"

"That's true. K, I'll be right back"

* the usual dance spot where Mizuki and Yuzuru have a conversation with Kumo*

"Why do that to them Kumo? U know if he finds out, he will have us axed from the competition." Mizuki

"So? It was only about me, I want to be the one. For him to see me."

"Selfish much? I mean, here you had us fooled there. Acting all friendly in stuff." Yuzuru

*a virtual video pops up and it's Jey*

"So, tell me u didn't Kumo."

"Tell you what?" as he did one arm push-ups

"Don't play stupid with me. You know exactly what! Tell the truth, now. Because if I find out that you are lying, you will not participate in the finals"

"Go on Kumo, tell him. What u just told Haneru and Kanon"

"*gulp* O-okay.

"Y-you really did, didn't you?"

"Yes sir."

"You know? I'm really disappointed in you. I didn't invite you and your team so that you can be selfish and do stuff on your own. I wanted you guys to work as a team. Not be dissolved. I thought you knew better. That u looked out for others. But I guess, it was all about me and what I want. Instead of how can I encourage others and that we work as a team" Jey El

"Does Kanon know?" Mizuki

"Yes, Master T passed the message along to me. He told me all about it" Jey El

"Nice going Kumo" Yuzuru

"Yeah, thought we were longtime friends. But then I guess, that was a lie too?"

"Guys please try to understand."

"Oh, we do alright. That you used us to get what you want. That you thought that it was all about you." Yuzuru

So the three go their separate ways. How will this unfortunate event unravel? And how will Haneru and Kanon cope with this? Stay tuned...


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What's up Zeta here :). I haven't updated my profile in a while. Due to me writing fics and chatting on the PlayStation FB pages.

That will change though.
After that short game of Knack; I'll be heading to Second Son :). PS4's first triple-A title of 2014. Should be an interesting ride with Delsin Rowe now at the helm of the new adventure.

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